Four Fishes


Four Fishes, originally uploaded by DRheins.

one little fishy
to three others said
things are topsy turvy
I’m floating on my head
don’t worry fishy
said the other three
as they let him drift
to the bottom of the sea

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2 thoughts on “Four Fishes

  1. I love how you phrased the first 2 lines, David. I found this kinda said, tho. The last 4 lines sort of sank like an anchor to the top 4; and I didn’t find the other 3 fishy very compassionate.. ;>

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